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14 August 2006 @ 10:49 pm
Yes yes yes!!  
Finally, my TR fanfic is coming together! I started putting together the potnetial first chapter today! Eeee! Still not completely happy but I can work on it and stoof! Eeee the ideas are flowing tonight!

Sneak Peak:

Darkness, she was surrounded by darkness, with only the light of the Chirugai as her guide. She was looking was for him, hoping the insistent pull of the metallic ring was leading her to him. After walking for what seemed like hours, Lara came to a stop and before her stood three different corridors. Three different corridors that could lead her to, or from Kurtis.

She held the Chirugai out towards the corridors, waiting for a response, for a sign, to show her what direction to go. She got none. The pull on the disk stopped and the glow began to fade. Panic rose within her, and she felt the hairs on the back of her neck stand up as she became increasingly aware of the approaching footsteps and distorted growls. Looking at the corridors she quickly darted down the corridor leading straight ahead, pushing her legs as fast as they could go. She was out of ammo and did not feel prepared enough to face one of those human plant hybrid experiments of Eckhardt’s minion without her pistols fully loaded.

She ran, willing her aching legs to go faster, trying desperately to make out shapes in the never-ending darkness. She was breathing heavily, adrenaline pumping through her body at an extreme rate.

Suddenly she ran into something solid, something solid with arms that gripped her and slammed her into a wall, her head smacking the offending object. She let out a groan of pain and instantly began to struggle, until a strong hand wrapped itself around her neck, soon joined by the other.

She was roughly lifted, her feet dangling helplessly in mid air as she tried to pry the strong hands from her neck, gasping for air she couldn’t breathe.

“Why…” Came the low hiss. Lara pulled on the hands again.

“Why Croft?” The voice hissed again. Lara suddenly became aware that the Chirugai, which was now laying on the floor as a result of being ambushed, was glowing. As her eyes adjusted she tried to draw a breath of surprise, but it sounded like a strangled wheeze for air.

“K-Kurtis?” She wheezed.

“Why!” This time he pulled her from the wall; hands still tightly wrapped around her neck and slammed her into the opposite wall. He leaned in close to her face, so close Lara could see the madness raging behind azure eyes. “Why did you leave me down here to die? Why didn’t you come and find me?” He roared before he slammed her against the wall again with great force…


 Might not even include that bit in any of it, but I like it nevertheless!



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'Manda Panda: TR:AoDsilvertongue1 on August 14th, 2006 10:06 pm (UTC)
Wow-- what a way to start a fic!
I loves your icon, btw :)
Kelsie: Kurtis Trentbratmerrill16 on August 14th, 2006 11:05 pm (UTC)
I love it!
Muse of Fire: Fantastic!muse0fire on August 15th, 2006 12:20 am (UTC)
Ooooh - great bit! Can't wait to read the rest!!
Filthy Bunnyfilthy_bunny on August 15th, 2006 09:21 am (UTC)
Eek! It's really good, and a very different take on what happens after that final cutscene. Now I want to know why Kurtis is acting so bizarrely. Keep it up! :)
zeenapunkzeenapunk on August 15th, 2006 01:34 pm (UTC)
Repeatage of last night - I LOVE IT! More, more, more!
Lauren: LaraKurtisKissshards_ofglass on August 15th, 2006 06:30 pm (UTC)

Thank You!

I just need to send the entire first chapter to someone to look over and then I can see about posting it if it goes to plan!
riot, you're a fucking riotthepanicbegins on August 15th, 2006 06:47 pm (UTC)
You knows I love it ...
Amy: LaraxKurtischirugal on August 16th, 2006 10:18 am (UTC)
*gasp* Wow! That was almost a kind of horror-genre excerpt. :) I'll be interested to see where this goes.
Laurenshards_ofglass on August 17th, 2006 09:48 pm (UTC)
Thank You! =)
Danaharmoniad on September 3rd, 2006 03:34 am (UTC)
I thought I'd reviewed, but no! So here it is, half-a-month late: *zombie moan* MORE. I love the bad!Kurtis vibe, and will beta for you if you need one.
Lauren: LaraKurtisKissshards_ofglass on September 10th, 2006 08:00 pm (UTC)
Really? You wouldn't mind being my beta for the story? YAY! *rugby tackle hugs you* *squeees*
Danaharmoniad on September 11th, 2006 03:31 pm (UTC)
*oof* It would be an honor and a privilege.
Laurenshards_ofglass on September 16th, 2006 10:57 pm (UTC)
Eeeee! *big squish* You're my new favourite person *big grin*